Caligula's Launderette

Hello Remember, I don't believe we have properly met, I go by CL or Cal around here, and this is how this crit will go, I'll tell you what I ...

Beautiful as always, hon. I am torn between telling you that you need more punctuation in the second stanza, and telling you it's fine the way it is. How about ...

La Méduse * hands clean, [fingers clean]- homologous spike structures signal licking the universe, plummeting into an orange fulmination with glow-tinted-green extremities. a bath of sulfur and phosp

Oh yeah, the first two are from a painting called The Accolade by Blair Leighton and the dance ones are from a painting by Degas, Aim and *deep thought* are ...

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Welcome hon, I go by Cal or CL around here. If you have any questions what-so-ever feel free to PM me. Have a cheesemuffin? Cheerios, CL .

Some more texty ones. :wink: * ** * that is a quote from a piece of fanfiction I wrote. ** All Snoink's fault. MOOHAHAHAHAHAHA, I have an evil moo-cow laugh.

That's why I do graphic art, I am crap with drawing but color, that's fun. :D Uh, it's a satyr, I think... Thank dearies. God, Myth, you should have seen ...

Yes, many. - Regan Who would you reveal your secrets to? Or do you already tell your secrets to something/someone?

Cause cake is so much better than death. SQUEE! For the first batch: go here Okay, so, here are so more avatar/icon makings from the likes of me. I had ...

As smaur would say, I'm shallow. *grins*

Wow, that's beauteous stuff. I agree with Snoink though, the green in the field is a little too bright, maybe a soft shade would help it not contrast so much ...

Wow, deja vu? *maniacal grins* Egads, I took me forever to get anywhere with dialogue. YAY descriptions. And last but not least, a writer's best tool is a pair of ...

Dear Claudette, So this is how one of these things goes. Everything that is a comment, suggestion and/or note by me is in bold, brackets, and violety. I thought some ...

Agreed. While we are on the subject, I am at 900.